Friday, February 12, 2010

Short but Sweet Slide

In the holidays, I went for a swim at the swimarama pools in Panmure. When we got there, I got changed into my togs quickly because I couldn't wait to go down the hydroslide. Running quickly up the stairs, I saw there was hardly anyone there so I got to go down first. It was dark when I went down but it was so much fun that I wanted to go down a second time. Sadly enough, I had to go. Even though I only got to take one turn it was still a lot of fun.

1 comment:

  1. Cool story Naomi. You have used some interesting sentence structure, which makes your story exciting to read. Great stuff and keep it up, because now I know you can do it! I can't wait to read the next one.
    Miss King


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