tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1611089781009963672.post211685810732721243..comments2016-11-08T10:19:47.148+13:00Comments on The Pen Made Me Write It!: Short but Sweet SlidePt England Blogs Gmailhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03180808682393548165noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1611089781009963672.post-65945688745095730802010-02-12T22:59:04.628+13:002010-02-12T22:59:04.628+13:00Cool story Naomi. You have used some interesting s...Cool story Naomi. You have used some interesting sentence structure, which makes your story exciting to read. Great stuff and keep it up, because now I know you can do it! I can't wait to read the next one.<br />Miss KingMiss Khttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12647759428985048365noreply@blogger.com