Thursday, February 10, 2011

The Beach Trip

“Yes were here,” I shouted as I got out of the car and onto the sand. As I got into the water it was freezing! The waves hit me so hard I got a fright as I nearly fell deeper into the water. My little cousins were playing in the sand and as the gross seaweed touched them they were scared.
My brother and I had a swimming contest, I won the first match then he won the last match. When we got out of the water we found black sand. We were making sand castles with our little cousins and my Pop. That was a lot of fun at the beach, I really hope we can go to the beach again.

1 comment:

  1. Hey Room18,

    Nice story about going to the beach. I really like the way you have describe about how the waves hit you hard on the face and you got a fright and you fell deeper into the water.

    Great story!


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