On the second day of camp, we were the last group to go kayaking. When we got there it was low tide so we had more problems to deal with than other groups. I really enjoyed kayaking even though we had to carry them to the beginning of the water.
Hi Awhina. I really like your story, but there is one thing bugging me, have you edited the sentence "When we got there it was low tide so we had more problems to deal with than other group".
Hello, My name is Marianne. I am in Dr. Strange's EDM 310 Class at South Alabama. I just wanted to say good job describing what happened on your second day of camp.
Hi Awhina.
ReplyDeleteI really like your story, but there is one thing bugging me, have you edited the sentence "When we got there it was low tide so we had more problems to deal with than other group".
Hello,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Marianne. I am in Dr. Strange's EDM 310 Class at South Alabama. I just wanted to say good job describing what happened on your second day of camp.