tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1611089781009963672.post2320704681003168638..comments2016-11-08T10:19:47.148+13:00Comments on The Pen Made Me Write It!: Neighborhood Taken Down By Earthquake!Pt England Blogs Gmailhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03180808682393548165noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1611089781009963672.post-5934377003527208922011-03-07T10:39:03.946+13:002011-03-07T10:39:03.946+13:00I like all the cool words you used.I like all the cool words you used.Jabezhttp://pesjabezv.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1611089781009963672.post-6179363778860491932010-06-04T12:09:40.793+12:002010-06-04T12:09:40.793+12:00Hey Jarna,
I like how you said "red hot embe...Hey Jarna,<br /><br />I like how you said "red hot embers".<br /><br />I know Mr.Barks said you had to say caused by an earthquack cause you said lasted night.<br /><br />Keep up the good work wyattwyatthttp://pesbarks.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1611089781009963672.post-53273469370209078342010-06-02T12:46:29.546+12:002010-06-02T12:46:29.546+12:00Good work JarnaGood work JarnaRaufnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1611089781009963672.post-67422139916319559642010-05-21T22:06:02.207+12:002010-05-21T22:06:02.207+12:00Wow Jarna! Well done on making sure that all your ...Wow Jarna! Well done on making sure that all your sentences were related to your paragraph topic. With your choice of vocabulary and thorough descriptions, you make the audience feel like they are actually at the scene of this disaster!Mrs. Barksnoreply@blogger.com